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Yasamin
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 1:19 am Post subject: Really strong fairy... Reply with quote
Alright, this is one of the main things I've been working on lately.



Yes, it's okay to laugh.
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PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2009 4:28 am Post subject: Reply with quote
I love the poses and expressions, and the falling hat is a great touch. The image is set up wonderfully, I get a good sense of urgency from it.


A few things I'd change though:
-Give the fairy more emphasis, maybe a bit of a glow or something. But then, I'm on a laptop and the screen doesn't display colour the best.
-Due to the angle the "picture" is taken at, it looks like the background is a street or something, and not the wall of a deep pit or a steep cliff. The top of the background works, but the light lines sort of do a perspective trick and make me read it as being a floor going off into the horizon.
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PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2009 9:00 am Post subject: Reply with quote
I could have sworn I replied to this already. lol.. ahh well

I like this pic. Though I wasn't seeing light lines, I was seeing speed lines. That's probably because I'm used to anime. I love the posing and expressions. Damn right that woman better be afraid, she doesn't have a good grip, you just know she is going to slip free and fall.
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PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2009 3:41 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
Norture wrote:
I love the poses and expressions, and the falling hat is a great touch. The image is set up wonderfully, I get a good sense of urgency from it.


A few things I'd change though:
-Give the fairy more emphasis, maybe a bit of a glow or something. But then, I'm on a laptop and the screen doesn't display colour the best.
-Due to the angle the "picture" is taken at, it looks like the background is a street or something, and not the wall of a deep pit or a steep cliff. The top of the background works, but the light lines sort of do a perspective trick and make me read it as being a floor going off into the horizon.


When the new computer is here, I'm definitely going to make the fairy glow. I think that's needed. And his eyes when I look at it now, bug me because they're looking up higher than they should. Very Happy Not enough focus.

Background, well, that'd have to be radically changed. Nothing against doing so I'll just have to figure out how. *grins*

Oh and edit... *huggles* We miss you!!
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PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2009 8:56 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
I have responded to this before. I refuse to laugh for it isn't funny. But good pic though.
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