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Cal Hurst · Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 6:38 pm Post subject: Legends of Lysoria - Feedback

We're nearing the climax and end of the story, and I want to know what you guys have thought of it so far. It has been somewhat of a slow build up, but the battle scene I have planned will be worth it, I promise.

Anyway, feedback be welcomed!
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Ceinwyn ab'Arawn · Transcendent Spammer Joined: 13 Dec 2004 Posts: 5017

I'm enjoying it, so far. It's whimsical!

Jonathan Strathmore · Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:34 pm Post subject:

Everyone loves a good climax. Keep it up.

Starfire · Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:35 pm Post subject: tale

I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Can't wait to see if Beowulf bites it. hehehehhe
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Sylvan Sherwood · Journeyman Joined: 14 Nov 2008 Posts: 107

Samon Triest · Sage Joined: 01 Jan 2004 Posts: 720

Teehee... You said climax.

Any story where Beo dies is a great story in my mind, sir. Keep up the good work.
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Jonathan Strathmore · Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 12:42 pm Post subject:

Miss Rhiannon · Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 9:09 pm Post subject:

Great writing you guys! I'm enjoying it much.
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Yasamin · Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 9:18 pm Post subject:

*looks at her watch*

*looks at the boards*

You're late for the next installment. whip

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Cal Hurst · Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 9:25 pm Post subject:

There won't be one tonight Wink

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Niall McStravick · Visitor Joined: 28 Jan 2009 Posts: 3

Story is awsome! It would be very easy to make this into a book.... I'd buy it. Well if the author was vaen , hmmm.... not so sure....*grins* Great read so far guys and gals. thanks

Merci d'Rue · Babbling Loony Joined: 18 Jan 2006 Posts: 2810

I can not read it because that would be supporting your sig Vaen and I can not support such such... misuse of my wording..

*grins* just kidding, when I have time as I have not lately I will give thy story a read over.
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Malicite · Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:00 pm Post subject:

Finally finished it. Good job guys.
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Cal Hurst · Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 11:59 pm Post subject:

Finale posted. You're all spared the long reads for now. Razz

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Yasamin · Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 12:10 am Post subject:

That was sad. *smacks him, and godmodes missing the armor!*
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(4:45:41 PM) Jarem: It becomes increasingly difficult to feel noble in my causes when my cause is to defend my charge from her own violent tendencies.