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Toren Smythe
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 1:35 pm Post subject: I is leet poet lulz Reply with quote
Behold.

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The boy without a face
Dances across the soft gray concrete.
His eyes aglow as no eyes show
He shimmers in my mind, a soft white form.
He sways to and fro on the bitter, soft earth
His mind in my tears.
For none else of him may be there.
I long for his pain to be mine
Tears- for him and his no form
Hurt- he is the boy without a face
Forever lost from my mind and never there at all.
He is the boy without a face
A love I could never find to see.

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Junpei
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:13 am Post subject: Reply with quote
From a literary sense I think its sound, but I don't really get the intent.
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Toren Smythe
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:16 pm Post subject: Reply with quote
Junpei wrote:
From a literary sense I think its sound, but I don't really get the intent.
Wanna know a secret, me neither.

Lies. I'll pm you.
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Yolen Grath
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 2:03 am Post subject: Reply with quote
I read, the lesser the meaning, the better the poetry!

Good stuff!
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Toren Smythe
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 2:07 am Post subject: Reply with quote
Yolen Grath wrote:
I read, the lesser the meaning, the better the poetry!

Good stuff!


Heh, quite the point of view. I like it! Keep up the good work.
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