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Hermoine66 Seasoned Veteran

Joined: 27 Jan 2008 Posts: 391 Location: in an evil wounderland
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:49 am Post subject: Poem |
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I wrote a poem for my character Sia and Yia , so read it and if anyone have comment share it please
Darkness you feel around you
You see four sliver eyes out of the darkness and there smirks on there faces
You better be cautious they might bite you if you say the wrong thing to them
There hieght of them is towering over you
As they whispers "two heads are alot more unqiue then one but we always have room for a third head
They almost have nothing to fear well except to lose there one love but they do not let that fear overcome them
They stand strong and proud that there a Umbran |
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Ceinwyn ab'Arawn Transcendent Spammer

Joined: 13 Dec 2004 Posts: 5017
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:52 am Post subject: |
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They are ferocious! |
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Yasamin Lore Master

Joined: 25 Jul 2007 Posts: 1221 Location: Behind the laughter that lays within the shadows
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:06 am Post subject: |
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Very ferocious.  _________________ (4:45:41 PM) Jarem: It becomes increasingly difficult to feel noble in my causes when my cause is to defend my charge from her own violent tendencies. |
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Kal'iksix Guest
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:14 am Post subject: |
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*shudders*
I am glad they are on my side.
Very nice poem, I love it! |
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Edda Certifiable

Joined: 20 Jan 2009 Posts: 1586 Location: US
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 1:46 pm Post subject: |
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I agree--I'm glad I'm on their good list  |
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Merci d'Rue Babbling Loony

Joined: 18 Jan 2006 Posts: 2810
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 1:48 pm Post subject: |
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Let me just say, I have always admired you for playing such a unique set of characters. I could not play these girls as well as you.
From the moment you created their mother, the part goblin to her lovely daughters they have been a source of creativity and inspiration for even me.
My dear you are a credit to rp in many ways in that you can play ferocious characters to gentle druids over the years.
Continue forth! _________________ May destiny guide you... |
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Ariana Lenoir Lore Master

Joined: 29 Sep 2008 Posts: 1140 Location: City of Britain
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:07 pm Post subject: |
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Well written. *smiles* Look forward to reading future ones _________________
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Mairsil Lore Master

Joined: 02 Jan 2004 Posts: 1241
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:39 pm Post subject: |
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Very well done. An ode to some of the very few young girls that could make myrddin uncomfortable. _________________ "You see I can not be forsaken, because I'm not the only one. We walk amongst you, beating, r#ping, must we hide from everyone?" - Jon Davis |
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Willow Smythe Certifiable

Joined: 25 Feb 2007 Posts: 1713
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 10:58 pm Post subject: |
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Hey Girlie, I mean Girlies =P. Well written!! I love it! Your concepts are very original and it's always a pleasure to RP with you Liz. _________________ Malorn ‎(12:14 AM):
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Cear Dallben ZOG Moderator


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Jonathan Strathmore Certifiable


Joined: 14 Sep 2007 Posts: 1986 Location: Inside your mind.
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 3:21 am Post subject: |
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I love Sia and Yia, the character that are two characters all there own are very inovative and imaginitive. Strong and vivacious characters with wonderful minds and heart. |
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