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Bailos Grand Inquisitor


Joined: 03 Jan 2004 Posts: 4613 Location: The Frozen Wastes
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 2:32 pm Post subject: Petition for Morus |
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First, hello!
Second...This isnt an insult, just a friendly request.
Third....Can you add some paragraphs to your story? Break it up a bit please? It's just too difficult to read somthing that long without a spatial break
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Talon Skyfire Seasoned Veteran

Joined: 01 Jan 2004 Posts: 374 Location: Sanctus
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 3:28 pm Post subject: |
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That story contains more dialogue than Morus has spoken in game in eh...6 or 7 years?
Well done Morus. _________________ ~Lord Talon Skyfire
King of Sanctus
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Toni McStravick Seasoned Veteran

Joined: 25 Feb 2006 Posts: 467
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 4:33 pm Post subject: |
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Oh my, tell me about it. Irl he doesn't even say that much.
Sorry love ya Morus  _________________ Lady Toni McStravick-Skyfire
Knights of Clan McStravick
Davaran: What's the most romantic wood?
Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind. ~Dr. Seuss |
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Cat Lyxen Sage

Joined: 25 Sep 2004 Posts: 695 Location: Yew!! Home Sweet Home
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 4:47 pm Post subject: hehehe |
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The strong quiet type can be very sexy. Especially if he is quiet when your hair cut looks really bad. Nightmare perm!! _________________ 'I'll end with an edit to Ditto's post since she obviously doesn't grasp the man code.......................having your sister entertained by another gentleman gives you clearance to entertain their sister without retribution while taking care of mom leads to a blood fued which can only end in death" Gnarlug |
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Morus McStravick Adventurer


Joined: 28 Feb 2006 Posts: 27
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 7:00 pm Post subject: Thanks |
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Thanks for pointing that out Bailos a bit of an oversight on my part i get a little wraped up in my story writing and well you can see the outcome but hey all fixed. _________________ Morus McStravick
Clan McStravick
Cursum Perficio I accomplish my course. |
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Bailos Grand Inquisitor


Joined: 03 Jan 2004 Posts: 4613 Location: The Frozen Wastes
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 8:10 pm Post subject: |
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I'm sure it will be a great read! Thanks Morus! |
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Molly Moderator


Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Posts: 3627 Location: The ARPC Boards or Sanctus, Luna, Malas (VA USA)
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 8:53 pm Post subject: |
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Wonderful story and I can't wait to read the rest. I didn't know you were the same Morus from Stormhaven. *waves*
After reading it the first time as was it is a bit easier on the eyes. I do the same thing and have to go back and make breaks in my stories. I am the queen of the runon sentence...my last count I had to break a sentence into 6 sentences. Good thing I read it over before I posted it. *laughs* and omg the spelling...*shudders* I have to put my posts into Word to do a spell check everytime. I don't do it for posts like this but I always do for ones on the Crossroads. _________________ Grand Duchess Molly Kaldhel
Oracle of Truth
The House Gauntlet
Sanctus, Luna, Malas
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xXoGDbJ5nLU
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Teh Glouris Lrod Kujabis Transcendent Spammer

Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Posts: 5740
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Leshok Majere Certifiable


Joined: 05 Jan 2004 Posts: 1790 Location: Ohio
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 9:29 pm Post subject: |
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block stories......slow typing, kilts, no pants....yep it has Morus written allllllll over it.
steve, this is a perfect chance for some old embarassing morus screenshots, lets dig them up. _________________ After all these years, I'm still putting up with Kuja and Vaen? whats wrong with me?
"Fri Jan 14 20:07:01 2005 [08:45:38] Kuja: ghaahahahahahha...ha..h.a..... NOTHING TO FREAKING DO IN GAME GAH"
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Teh Glouris Lrod Kujabis Transcendent Spammer

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